Thank you for being a beta reader

This download link contains the short story that I would love for you to beta-read. I’m curious about which parts you liked, didn’t like, and any particular area you were lost and didn’t understand.

The short story is about Jonathan and the Gallery of Nightmares. Each novella has six short stories in which something bad happens to Jonathan when he enters the Shadow Nook. However, once the short story is over, he finds himself safe and sound back in the gallery.  The stories provide keys to how he can improve his life in the real world.

Today’s short story is called: Karma is Best Served Cold